Sunday, 17 July 2011

Six Sentence Sunday: Twisted Creature

My contribution to Six Sentence Sunday is from Twisted Creature, my Halloween contribution for Torquere last year.

"What's going on?"

"Breakfast if you shift your ass, otherwise Peter will eat it all." James says, sitting down at the table.

In the kitchen.

In the house that suddenly looks like any other house, down to the pile of paperwork on the dresser.

"You're dead," Chris accuses, feeling somewhat rude at being so blunt.

Peter looks a little pained as he says "Well, yes, but don't let it stop you eating the food."


  1. Love the dialog and your use of present tense. I also like the detail you included: "pile of paperwork on the dresser." Good six.

  2. Very cheeky six. I really like the last line too, you made me laugh. Thank you.

  3. Because really, why should being dead interrupt breakfast? *grin*

  4. Cute 6. Wonder what kind of breakfast the dead have. hummmmm